A Shopify product page that answers what stops the sale
A Shopify product page has one job: answer the question that stops a buyer, right where they decide. Tilly's CRO agent reads each page against your real customers' objections and writes the fix, worst first, in your voice.
Free · nothing to connect · the first pass takes about a minute
- credits for a page-by-page CRO audit
- 20credits for a page-by-page CRO audit
- credits to rewrite one product description
- 3credits to rewrite one product description
- credits to plan and size an A/B test
- 10credits to plan and size an A/B test
- for your first store audit, with nothing to connect
- $0for your first store audit, with nothing to connect
Most product page advice is a checklist: bigger images, a sticky button, a countdown. Some of it helps some stores. What helps yours depends on who is reading. A cautious first-time buyer needs proof and an easy return; someone buying a second time needs to find the variant and go. The fix starts with the customer, not the checklist.
What the best Shopify product pages answer before the scroll
The best Shopify product pages answer four things before anyone scrolls: what this is, who it is for, what it costs with any offer, and why to believe it. Then the add-to-cart button is easy to find and the next step is obvious, on a phone first.
Tilly's CRO agent reviews each product page for exactly that: above the fold, images, price and offer, reviews, answers to objections and the add-to-cart path. It reviews collection pages, the cart and your home page the same way. A CRO audit costs 20 credits.
- What it is and who it is for, in the title and first lines
- Price and offer stated plainly
- Proof near the add-to-cart button
- Reviewed on mobile first
Every finding tied to one of your customers
A finding without a customer is a guess. Each one Tilly writes names the persona it affects and the objection behind it. For example: cautious first-timers cannot see the return policy until the footer, and their top worry is whether the product will suit them.
The fix then answers that objection: a short line under the add-to-cart button, and a question-and-answer block using the words customers already use in your reviews. Each fix is 10 credits, and comes as steps naming the exact place in Shopify to make the change.
- The persona and the objection behind each finding
- Fixes that answer the objection, not a generic checklist
- Steps naming the exact place in Shopify
Store copy written in your customers' words
Most store copy describes the product the way the maker sees it. Buyers decide on how it fits their life. Tilly rewrites product titles and descriptions for one persona at a time, in your brand voice, using the words that show up in your reviews. A rewrite costs 3 credits.
Written copy goes into Shopify when you apply it, and only if the text there is still what Tilly showed you as the before. Layout changes stay as steps you make yourself. Tilly does not edit your theme.
- Titles and descriptions rewritten for one persona
- Trust blocks and FAQs drawn from real reviews
- Applied only when you say so
Ship the small fixes, test the big ones
A clearer line about returns can go live today. Moving reviews above the fold, or changing the offer, is worth testing first. Tilly sends those to the experiments agent with the hypothesis already written; it plans and sizes the test for 10 credits.
Tilly does not split traffic itself. You run the test with your tool of choice, enter the counts, and Tilly calls the winner from them, so a change that only looked better on a busy weekend does not get shipped as a win.
- Low-risk fixes shipped straight away
- Bigger changes planned as tests, with the size worked out
- Winners called from the counts you enter
See what your store is missing
Paste your store URL. Tilly reads the storefront, your reviews and your marketing, and comes back with a store score, your customer personas and a 30-day plan.
Free · nothing to connect · the first pass takes about a minute
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Questions people ask
What makes a good product page on Shopify?
One that answers the buyer's main worry before they scroll, shows proof from real customers near the button, states the price and any offer plainly, and works on a phone. Everything else on the product page supports those four.
Do I need Shopify product page apps?
Usually one or two: a review app so proof shows on every product page, and perhaps a size or fit guide if you sell clothing. Each of the shopify product page apps you add puts code on the page, so add them for a job you can name and remove the ones you stop using.
How do I edit a product page in Shopify?
The words, images and price of a product page in Shopify are edited under Products, by opening the product. The layout, which sections appear and in what order, is edited in your theme editor, where product pages share a template.
Does Tilly change my theme?
No. Layout fixes are written as steps naming the exact place in Shopify to make the change, and you make it, then mark it done. Only written copy, like a title or description, can be put in place for you, and only when you apply it.
What does a CRO audit cost with Tilly?
20 credits for the audit and 10 for each written fix. A product title or description rewrite is 3 credits. The first store audit, which checks your product page and cart on the way, is free.
Should I copy the best product pages I can find?
Copy the structure, not the words. A layout that works for another store answers its buyers' worries, not yours. Use your reviews to find what your buyers ask, then answer that in the same places they do.
Start with a free audit of your store
Paste your store URL. The first pass takes about a minute and needs no account. Save a card (nothing is charged) and Tilly reads the whole store and works out who buys from you.
Signing up starts with the audit: your account is made at the end of it, and nothing is charged.